thought the slow motion was overdone, or not done correctly, it just felt slow and boring. didnt suit the music.
the smoke/fog effect worked most of the time, a few points where the toris shadow/reflection through it off though, most notably at the clip at 0:49
the part at 0:51 where the lighting went slightly darker was awesome, definitely an awesome feature.
editing overall was pretty good, some decent replays and stuff
good music choice, suits toribash quite well
my biggest suggestion would be to look at some other peoples videos, like slycooper, tengo, oracul and macperfect, maybe even andreyoshi. just to get a feel for how and when to use the slowmo.
slowmo videos can work, but it must work with the music, movements and timing etc.
overall a good effort, looking forward to more from you.