#love enporiu:
Pros:
extremely cool opener
hits are nice
good speed throughout the replay
cool boom
Cons:
second kick doesn't dm
last hit doesn't look really powerful
no pose
flow diminishes after first kick
Things you should do:
you certainly doesn't have any problems with your movement, but your hits are a bit sloppy IMO, maybe you should spend more time for each hit so that it would look good, also, sustain your flow, you can achieve this by keeping your spins and keep it in the same direction, but it's okay if you want more destruction.