Toribash
UMM HAIR BETTER EARS SKIN COLOR AND TAKE OUT THE BLUE IN THE EYES THAT PART OF UR EYES ARE WHITE ALSO IF URS LOOK LIKE THATS THEN U MIGHT THINK OF GOING TO TEH DOCTORS
You could add some depth to the hear,maybe a scar or something
Your messed up world enthrills me
It's pretty expressionless.Give it a bit of personality.

Also,eyes are too square,tall and the pupils need bringing closer to middle.As they are now,they're kinda like (0 )_( 0)

Bring the ears closer to the face as well,give him some side burns,bring the back of the hair further down.


Also,reference images can help alot when your trying to draw something your not all that familiar with.


Anyway it's pretty good for a first attempt,so keep it up.
shading lots of it. try make him look accualy REAL. look in the mirror. Infact scrap that..shards or glass everywhere is dangerous. Look at a picture of a REAL person and compair what does he have thats different? Skin tone. Wrinkles? dark area's? freckles? ect.
ok i'll try thanks for all the tips it could take a while EDIT: I want to know how can i make that the head looks real(i don't know how to explain)
Last edited by FHxleader; Sep 15, 2009 at 02:04 PM.