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[Img] First Tori Vector :D


First Tori vector
I'd like some C&C if possible.

Sorry for the white lines btw, it's cause I didn't fill it in all the way, but I'll fix it.
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Very nice Zazn, I really like the amount of details in the picture. There are some white lines which could be easily removed by drawing over them. Next time you can make lines showing every single joint.
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Yeah I know, I'm not the best at vectoring like that. This was pretty much practice anyways.
Thanks though <3
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very good zanzaba, but it would be better if you added shadow, you could easily do that by making a 25% black layer amongst certain places on the body
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i like the vector head, could u vectorize mine?
the legs need some more work, othe than that it looks pretty good for a first try.
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Very nice!!! :o

I love it

The feet are just bugging me

The hands should be smoother/darker just like on the real texture
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Originally Posted by HoboJoey View Post
i like the vector head, could u vectorize mine?
the legs need some more work, othe than that it looks pretty good for a first try.

Yeah I'll be making one sometime.

Originally Posted by macshiz View Post
very good zanzaba, but it would be better if you added shadow, you could easily do that by making a 25% black layer amongst certain places on the body

Thanks, I'll probably do that.
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Very nice!!! :o

I love it

The feet are just bugging me

The hands should be smoother/darker just like on the real texture

Yeah, I'll see what I can do ;o
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Looks very nice for the first one.
Not too simple and not too detailed.
Maybe add a simple background and some shadows. (especially on the joints).
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Yeah I know, I will try to add shading to it sometime soon.
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