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[img]Another quickie
Hi hi.



Suggestions anyone?

Like background or something

Last edited by AlphasoniK; Jun 16, 2009 at 01:39 AM.
Fr3styL . Improving by Improvising
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Oh nice sketch you have there.

Well for a quick one, I like it. The eyes, that orange fits alot, but it would be cool if the white lines, that really look like spray can lines, would say some words, you know, like a graffiti just more abstract and minimalistic.

7/10
Good idea.
Ill work on it ^^
Any way to improve the human?
Fr3styL . Improving by Improvising
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The Robe seems not "connected" with the Face, should be some more connection, also, bigger version with feet wont be bad ;o
background is kinda terrible :P would be nicer a little smoother, try using opacity 10% or something, and do the same effect with lots of layers.

The 'human' is very inhuman, the arm is the same size as the head, and its very huncbacked. The hood, as Nobuddie said, should not be connected!

Heres some basic proportions


and a refernce on cowls.


Top tip: use references!

EDIT: BTW: i love the eye flame style, thicken it up and make it a little more cartoony
Last edited by Gorman; Jun 15, 2009 at 07:08 PM.
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Thanks guys.
Anything on the background?
Where would this "humanoid" fit in?
I might do the bigger version....

Gonna work on it NAO!
Fr3styL . Improving by Improvising
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the arms on the body are too small and the bdy is too big.

but for a quick drawing its much better than mine I love the eyes thoa very nice but the backround could use some work.

make sure when you do any art it has a refferance they help alot.


8/10
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Frak did i double post?
Please merge moderator.

/merged ~Nobuddie
Last edited by Nobuddie; Jun 16, 2009 at 02:11 PM.
Fr3styL . Improving by Improvising
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Merged, I like the axe, but the new figure looks stiff, good job on the orange lines now.

8/10