i cnced the earlier version on the 1st page my bad

everything up until 310 is fine, its not super woah impressive stuff but u clearly meant to do it and it doesn't look bad so sist is satfistafactory

at frame 300 the little heli kick u did to make him spin is super ugly, in future when u do a kick or push something with ur leg, keep it atleast held or extended 2 put emphasis on it, looks pretty dumb when u dont

the way u came out of the heli kick looked bad too, u sort of stopped halfway through the spin and just flipped over and reset

landing pos was awkward (pause at 240) and u ghosted a whole gosh damrn lot

i am unaware of why u contracted ur right wrist at 217 but that looked bad
everything from the heli kick to like frame 175 is pretty poop y but at 175 that position has pretty good potential to continue the manip

im not sure if u actually want to go through with the decap like that because it looks like ur about to start doing a good manip then u ruin it with a tk decap

i dont think ur terrible because ur movement at the start was fine but i feel like u set very low standards for urself in the replay and just kind of winged it

donot do that

everything still applies though except for the dm part