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Well i havent done art in a while and we are remakeing my clan so i decided to make the banner for it.
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you should work on the smoothness of the hair, not a bad start.

the top looks nice and the text is real good but the right stick that connects the elbow to the wrist is a bit to thin in my opinion.

Pretty bloody awesome.

But the joints are abit small.

IV never tried this style so im still working out joint size and such.

I like it, the only thing i dislike is the joints. Needs more outlining. Other then that, good job.

Eh, im still working on it.
Do you know any gimp effects that outline the layer.

Use a rendered tori as a reference when trying something like this. It makes everything a whole lot easier ;).
For outlining a layer, try alpha to selection, selection to path, stroke path? There's probably an easier way but that's all I can think of without looking at GIMP.

I was originally going to do that but i couldnt get it into that post can someone go onto blender and get a tori render in that position for me

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Clean, original, no brushes. I like that it isn't an eye-raping font either.