K, so let's nitpick, shall we?
I didn't like how your elbow looked when you punched uke's knees for a lift. I didn't like how the first grab looked, your wrist up against him just looked ugly. You fixed it soon, but I would prefer if that first grab looked right. The synchro-punch looked sick though. The last kick was messy. That pose could've made that pose a standing pose too. It looked like you could've done that easily.
I made one for you, it might look a bit "gay" compared to the rest, but hope you don't mind me posting it.
Last edited by Larfen; May 8, 2010 at 04:14 AM.