people playing: 20, servers online: 8, games played: 142,140,309 Top Player: Karstnator

  Toribash Community » Toribash » Art
Register FAQ General Rules Community
Reply
 
Thread Tools Display Modes
Old Nov 27, 2016   #1
pushka
 
BlueEvilSlavMy Belt
Join Date: Oct 2007
Posts: 1,702



Delayer's Mobile Photography thread
Good day, here I going to post some of my photos, made by my mobile phone

Works.


All that I use
Phone: iPhone 7
Soft: EnlightApp, Snapseed, VSCOcam

CnC are truly welcome!

WIP
[00:07] <BlueEvil> Violets are blue, roses are red, all the time i say this, delayer gets wet.

Last edited by pushka; Nov 29, 2016 at 06:56 PM.. Reason: added new photo
pushka is offline   Reply With Quote
Old Nov 27, 2016   #2
Vinyl
Raconteur
 
4th Dan Black Belt
Join Date: May 2015
Posts: 3,648
Clan: Catalyst



Well the lights and black and white effects are cool, I think you should focus more on the composition of your picture (idk if we can say this in english), like thinking about the lines you want to show before taking the photography.
I think you should try urbex
Vinyl is offline   Reply With Quote
Old Nov 27, 2016   #3
Lost
Senior Member
 
7th Dan Black Belt
Join Date: Aug 2016
Posts: 589



Your effect and general lighting is amazing also
may I recommend a camera.
When I did photography for a while
I used the cannon eos 5D
its an amazing camera
Lost is offline   Reply With Quote
Old Nov 27, 2016   #4
pushka
 
BlueEvilSlavMy Belt
Join Date: Oct 2007
Posts: 1,702



Thank you guys
I don't know about camera, I like my phone camera and since it not professional it satisfies me
[00:07] <BlueEvil> Violets are blue, roses are red, all the time i say this, delayer gets wet.
pushka is offline   Reply With Quote
Old Nov 27, 2016   #5
Ezeth
Item Frogger
 
3rd Dan Black Belt
Join Date: May 2009
Posts: 6,738



Originally Posted by Vinyl View Post
I think you should focus more on the composition of your picture (idk if we can say this in english), like thinking about the lines you want to show before taking the photography.

I agree with this, you have 3 interesting buildings here that could look great if captured well, the issue here is that either of the photos are quite spot on. Try to think of simplification and exclusion when taking the photography, what do I want to show with taking this image. And after you figure that out you can think about excluding everything you don't want in the image. Let me show you an example using your own photos.

Photo 1: this is probably the best one of these 3 photos, very dark and stylish, but a couple of things are in the way here, like the logo that is cut in the middle, would be better to either include the whole name of the building or leave out the name of the building depending on what you want the message to be. There is a white space on the left side of the building but not on the right, ruining the balance a bit.

Photo 2: again using the rules of simplification and exclusion. Do you really need the cars to be in the photo? do you really need the fence? what are you trying to show in this photo. Looks like the damaged concrete of the walls in this building would tell a cool story, what is the best angle to capture these features?

Photo 3: again damaged cool looking walls, but does the railing belong in this image? maybe better to exclude it? I don't know what happened to the black levels in this image, looks a bit washed out.

The fact that you are using a phone camera doesn't really matter anymore, there are many professional photographers using phone cameras. Of course you might not have all the same options as a camera with several lenses, but you can still get some sweet shots.
Ezeth is offline   Reply With Quote
Old Nov 27, 2016   #6
pushka
 
BlueEvilSlavMy Belt
Join Date: Oct 2007
Posts: 1,702



Thanks for amazing cnc, Very helpful, really, appreciated
I jus started mobile photography and any cnc would be helpful
New photo
[00:07] <BlueEvil> Violets are blue, roses are red, all the time i say this, delayer gets wet.
pushka is offline   Reply With Quote
Old Nov 28, 2016   #7
Vinyl
Raconteur
 
4th Dan Black Belt
Join Date: May 2015
Posts: 3,648
Clan: Catalyst



This one looks better to me.
Do you know the rule of thirds?
Well most of your lines are placed correctly, I like that effect you did with the trees

How I see it

Vinyl is offline   Reply With Quote
Old Nov 28, 2016   #8
pushka
 
BlueEvilSlavMy Belt
Join Date: Oct 2007
Posts: 1,702



Actually I didn't know that, just took photo how I see it
Thanks for that teoretic material and thanks for cnc :)
I like that you appreciate my work :)
[00:07] <BlueEvil> Violets are blue, roses are red, all the time i say this, delayer gets wet.
pushka is offline   Reply With Quote
Old Dec 30, 2016   #9
pushka
 
BlueEvilSlavMy Belt
Join Date: Oct 2007
Posts: 1,702



put gigantic photos in spoilers -tyzi


I'm very busy now but still making some photos
I wish I had more time
[00:07] <BlueEvil> Violets are blue, roses are red, all the time i say this, delayer gets wet.

Last edited by TyZi; Jan 5, 2017 at 05:22 AM..
pushka is offline   Reply With Quote
Old Dec 30, 2016   #10
Ezeth
Item Frogger
 
3rd Dan Black Belt
Join Date: May 2009
Posts: 6,738



Looks better already, I really like the last one there. Since there are such high amount of details in the buildings you photograph you might want to check out HDR photography, can make your photos quite awesome.
http://www.digitaltrends.com/photogr...e-photography/
Some phones offers HDR as a built in function, I know iphone 7 does in settings->photos->hdr. It looks like you have this effect in your last photo, so you might know this already.

Also rules of photography
http://www.photographymad.com/pages/...position-rules
remember that every rule is ment to be broken, but its nice to have these guides in the back of your head when taking photos.

Last edited by Ezeth; Dec 30, 2016 at 06:27 PM..
Ezeth is offline   Reply With Quote
Reply


Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off

Forum Jump


All times are GMT +1. The time now is 09:27 AM.




Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.2
Copyright ©2000 - 2018, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
ragdoll fighting game physics fighting game ragdoll fighting physics funmotion joints martial arts karate pc mac free game turn based game