Patrickooo: I liked it overall but it seemed a bit stiff and slow at times. Plus it was pretty obvious when you ghosted for the pose. The boomshot was nice but a little bit direct for my taste. Good, but I have seen better from you.
Tylercoon: Since you said its going to be a manip I am amusing that initial kick is meant to lift up uke. You are a bit too far back and are going to run into a worse problem then what i had with momentum :<. So if possible get closer and move faster!
Last edited by Ealtrik; Jan 6, 2014 at 07:15 PM.