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Originally Posted by TomPaine View Post
I would move the white circles more toward the center of the face
5-10 pixels or so.

Nah,it's supposed to look like that.
WON THORN'S TOURNEY
uh don't make the pigtail stroke thicker? Thin them out.

Also the X on top of her back hair as seen on the clip is missing.
Jalis: Freelancer, you're a duck | Sachi: Freelancer, you're a duck | Reanimator: Freelancer, you're a duck
satiknee: Freelancer, you're a duck | Wiggi: Freelancer, you're a duck | Tarlan: Freelancer, you're a duck


I won't thin the pigtails,i fend them cool as they are.
So is this a finished product?
WON THORN'S TOURNEY
thin the pigtails slightly then. Also X is a bit too thick too, same there, just slightly not much.

As they look way off right now.
Jalis: Freelancer, you're a duck | Sachi: Freelancer, you're a duck | Reanimator: Freelancer, you're a duck
satiknee: Freelancer, you're a duck | Wiggi: Freelancer, you're a duck | Tarlan: Freelancer, you're a duck
The eyes are too wide, and there is a small yellow/pink-is line over her pupils by the hair.

Other than that I can't see anything wrong.

I like the simplicity and that it is a power puff girl.

Edit: And the iris is touching the sides of the eye, doesn't look good imo.
I like it this way. :<
But since it's head for you...I'll just send it to you and you edit the way you like it.

E:Tamashii,actually there's not.
Don't know why it looks like on that sphere,tho.
WON THORN'S TOURNEY
haha love your style dad

but look at the left eye its pixelated
Want some Head texture? PM ME
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