Loved the opener, but the 1st hop wasn't smooth at all. However, the transition to the grab was pretty clean. The split and boom were very explosive, but awkward in some way I can't seem to explain. You also grabbed and ungrabbed on the way to those kicks, which sort of made me go "Ewwwwwww". The little neck DM was a nice touch. Fix the pose.

7/10

Thanks lagfag. Coming up: either a manipulation or classic grav. madman. Anyone want to vote on what I should turn it to?

Shit son
One of the coolest manips i've eva' seen

Just need some BIG ASS BOOMS

The first part of the opener was ok then you continued it weirdly.
In my opinion grab manip'ing is cheating

other then that you ruined the spin with uke :c
and the neck.

10/10

Only because you have the balls to grab-manip. Now make up for it with a 7 piece boom. It's the only way.

Thanks.

Here's something different that I might take. I really do like the flow of the first one though.

still a wip

you wanted booms, u get booms sir

anything i should do before I finalize this?


edit:
planning to hack it to teleport to the leg and dm it. never done teleporting hacking so I should start now, its "in"

you asked for booms, watch the god damn booms and CnC