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Originally Posted by dengue View Post
Your coloring is fine, but the mapping is a flaw

Can you indicate what is flawed with the mapping,
and perhaps provide feedback as to how to fix it?
Here is a flat of the most current version:

FLAT

Last edited by ThePirateKing; Apr 12, 2014 at 02:32 AM.
The past makes you wanna die out of regret, and future makes you depressed out of anxiety. So by elimination, the present is likely the happiest time.
small front, big side and high jaw, you should watch the forehead side with the rest of the head.
I don't really understand what you are saying.
It's too vague..
I did, however, notice some things that need
drastic changes (if this is what you mean, ok).
I need to raise the bottom lip and make the
chin bigger, widen the jaw bone, and possibly
have to rework the throat.
The past makes you wanna die out of regret, and future makes you depressed out of anxiety. So by elimination, the present is likely the happiest time.
Looks okay. But the teeth dude, they're wrong.

I'm not sure you should remake a anatomically incorrect head with the same mistakes.
Last edited by Metriakon; Apr 12, 2014 at 12:43 PM.
Why don't you look up "Colossal Titan"...
The head I'm making isn't suppose to be anatomically correct.
Thanks for the concern, but as I don't use a specific image for
reference, I didn't post a reference image in the first post, I
guess it's my fault. ;P
Last edited by ThePirateKing; Apr 12, 2014 at 06:26 PM.
The past makes you wanna die out of regret, and future makes you depressed out of anxiety. So by elimination, the present is likely the happiest time.

wip 6


wip 7

The past makes you wanna die out of regret, and future makes you depressed out of anxiety. So by elimination, the present is likely the happiest time.
im not a fan of the bright colors you have there

Edit: it looks good but it looks sketchy try polishing it if u can
Last edited by Freestuffz; Aug 10, 2014 at 01:11 PM.
Originally Posted by Freestuffz View Post
im not a fan of the bright colors you have there

Edit: it looks good but it looks sketchy try polishing it if u can

Yeah, I know.. I tried something different when shading it, just
to experiment..

First I shaded in black and white, or grey, like this:

First


Then I added another layer which contained the colors, this one:

Second


But upon merging them, the colors were too bright, see:

Third


So I added another layer of color and it came out like this:

Final


But I'll probably fix that sometime..Along with the sketchy lines.
The past makes you wanna die out of regret, and future makes you depressed out of anxiety. So by elimination, the present is likely the happiest time.
the 3rd wip to me shows the detail of the muscles but in the final piece you seem to cover the details