You still haven't changed what I requested before. While the head does look nice, I don't think the detail level is enough. Overall, I think you are able to improve each area of it.
For a better understanding of the minimul level of head I wish for, use the heads from the head expo in the art section. To be more precise, if you think your head needs a bit of improvement to get accepted there, then improve it, you have a lot of time to make it as good as you possibly can.