pls probro don't post your replays in someone else's replay thread (unless they authorized you)
Also, CnC to your 2 replays bgjames:
Eclipise: A stiff, but surprisingly adequate build-up before the decap. The rest after the decap wasn't good though, I suggest you edit the replay a bit more to improve the things after the decap. Work on the fluidity of your movements on this, but otherwise you seemed to improve.
Explict: Work on getting proper 'hits' instead of rips. Also a point to remember: don't rub uke just to get dismemberments.
take these how you will as i am certainly no expert
No Longer: I liked it untill after the decap, i would have ended it at the decap. Although i liked the spinning jump you did, the kick that did not DM anything after that was unnecessary
Here anymore: Good quick destruction, but one you finished destroying uke you were left in an awkward position. the transition to get into the pose wasn't very good in my opinion