sorry, english it's not my main tongue so I don't understand some of your terms

good job Moon

and new wip

Redid the eyes, added more of a crystal/smokey effect by request

These look like gills now

xpad make the verticle lines Morelike a jawline, \_\_\_ instead of (_(_(_ . Also could you make the lines thinner.Ok, Moon's I like most still, torrito I dont really like :/if it were sharper maybe but No thank you

made a new version... tell me if you like it or if I should continue the last one

I prefer This one, but can you add another line and not have the lines connect in the back, have them fade near the Other set of lines, and make them more to the side.WAY better though

how's this?

Just go back a step(the one before this), spread out the back lines and add the 4th line on the front

On the back erase the 3 thin odd lines connecting the Jaw lines