Illusion- Interesting opener. I really liked how you went into the spin, next time, contract pecs slightly and contract arms (in my opinion, that gives a more realistic spin). I liked the nice quick jab bifurcate, but I'm not sold on your decap. I think you should have edited a bit more until you got it, but I can see why you couldn't (since he was falling). Since you got a ground decap, the third kick was kind of pointless. Your transition to your pose could have been better, as well as the pose itself. Despite these issues, this was a great replay
PubicSoup #3: Liked the opener, but the cork could have been smoother. The first kick type thing with the side punch was good, but avoid hitting your head like thatoff Uke's hand. The transition to the decap was nice but a touch stiff. Transition to the pose was kind of crummy. Too many spins, and then not even a great pose to follow. Either way, well done to the both of you :]
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I made a skeet to your replay "Illusion". Not a great position, but a nice pose. It didn't take too long, and I wasn't really paying attention to where I was when I made the skeet. I know it's a bad position to skeet, but it's accurate. I thought you might like to see an example (if it's ok to post here).
Last edited by SkyWhale; Oct 9, 2014 at 01:24 AM.
Reason: <24 hour edit/bump