Hmm, I guess my eyes deceived me. I love being wrong c:
Well, the fact that the right leg was contracted and the left leg stayed pretty stiff bothered me. You over rotated the chest and just barely made the landing. Then the twitchy transition into the pose, that you fell in.
But you might want to edit it, because you have some competition with Xioi. :o
Edit: I just happened to write this before I saw your edit Irrita, hehe. I suppose if you tweak some things it should be a pretty good Cork Swipe. So yeah, Just tweak it a bit, repost it, and Chilledon and I will make a final decision
Last edited by 2WC; Mar 30, 2014 at 05:43 PM.