I watched this replay several times now and I cant stop loving this beginning, this sweep/low kicking move you made with tori is absolutely amazing. The whole wip is a fairly solid replay imo, with good moves and decent interactions but I think the attacks and heavy contact are lacking in quality in this replay.
Nothing is really going wrong, but isnt to my liking that the toris hit each other so little often. Anyway, the replay still can be worked on, there is a lot more to do and also the last part seems to be going to a good path
overall this replay is looking very good already and I didnt expect less from you, good job mate. Keep it up