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Meh replays
Welp this is what I can do not much really, some cnc would help,help is appreciated.

Here are a pk a selfspar and a madman so feel free to cnc the one you want,

*edited* mods added as well
Attached Files
meeh its something pk1.rpl (403.0 KB, 15 views)
badass opener4.rpl (162.5 KB, 16 views)
onso_spardojo.tbm (26.8 KB, 10 views)
parkour-dreamfixed.tbm (6.7 KB, 10 views)
Last edited by Onsola; Feb 15, 2016 at 04:17 AM.
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Badass Opener4:

opener's pretty badass
split was nice
split was nice again
decap was also nice

EDIT: You attatched them

Inspired spar finally finished:

that's pretty neat
movements were great, you weren't moving too fast or too slow, just perfect movement
ko was pretty neat aswell

meeh its something pk1:

run was really neat
the way u got over the wall looked unrealistic imo
reverse momentum is bad
bit twitchy when u go down
slide under the pipe thing was good
took to long to get into a running position
ending is nice
Last edited by RayWill135; Feb 15, 2016 at 04:23 AM.
invite me to your clan ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
k I am not getting cnc here :/ idk an other pk
Attached Files
Gl pkcity prt2 4.rpl (422.2 KB, 5 views)
parkour_city_prt2.tbm (23.2 KB, 1 views)
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Gl pkcity prt2 4.rpl

You never made a step with you entire foot on the ground which kinda annoys me,
work with your arms a bit better so it doesnt look awkward at times
Hold dat darn neck pls
the spin and little cork was beautiful but after that the run looked like you were standing
up.
flip could have less contracted glutes

Anyway, its still really good, so gj
7.5/10
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Alright thanks, here is a lil something I did, I might edit it to make it a madman later
Attached Files
jeez da kick tho.rpl (98.4 KB, 7 views)
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I dunno man. Kick is nice and all, but the opener and follow-up is pretty stiff.

I'd suggest doing a remake on the kick itself, and set the aim up for an easier boom.
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Agreeing with Sweppie.

It's kinda lacking things to comment on.


Maybie redo it and make it into a manip, get more dm's or just do something crazy

Idk, it's just to Little for a replay in my Eyes.



kick was sweet doe
Jun 2, 2023 - .best. day. ever.
well I remade it might better now; I started editing from the frame 450, I wanted to get a boom on the torso but i didnt manage to get it, might try again later
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any better1.rpl (147.9 KB, 3 views)
Last edited by Onsola; Mar 3, 2016 at 11:44 PM.
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