So I made this song.

My first attempt at romance/emotional contemporary writing.

I made it in my head and then played it this morning, filming on my Canon EOS Rebel T3i camera (then uploading to youtube) (so sorry for the relatively poor audio!).

I'm open to writing more to this song, but I'm not too sure, I'd like some comments on it.

My sister says she will write a violin accompaniment when she comes to visit next, which I will probably upload as well.

Sheet music soon to come (hopefully)!

SHEET MUSIC: https://www.noteflight.com/scores/vi...6a7168127545bf

My own thoughts: Too simple in the bass clef, and not enough variation in the treble. The melody is fine, but too repetitive, and there's not enough changes in pitch or notes played. I think the song needed some more depth- more highs and lows.

Any comments would be great! Name suggestions would be awesome :P