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[VID] Hollow Life (Toribash)
Small thingy I made in order to try out for Editing Perfect.



Sony Vegas 12 Pro

Coast Modern - Hollow Life (great band, really suggest checking them out)

Replays in order: Notnoob, Youngsandm, Liar, Bisonic
It's pretty sick, although it feels kinda short. Your style is nice and reminds me a bit of your previous edit a few months ago.

The entire part from 0:14 - 0:20 is sick, I like how you synced on the horizon, it's subtle and not too intense. Grats on being accepted
The rays effect you did needs some work.

And the yellow tint near the top of the comp looks kinda ehh <- this could be better too

Didn't like the transition at 0:13. It just cuts weird, doesn't flow too well

Ending was good

0:08 was good also

Beginning 360 camera movement was also good.

The tilt at 0:07 didn't feel right with the next scene because it was just a flat camera.

こんにちは、私はデータです。

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