I can't really say anything more than what Sweps already said.
It's fine if you spend a lot of time in a replay, I mean, I normally take around 2-3 hours a replay(lolntrly) and this one looked like it was made in 15 mins.
Your replays needs more "mind and effort" into it.
Until you can't cover that, your replays won't really come out the way you want them to.

Ok i try

Not anything this time. Ill try new things :>

ok ive tested some tori movement and boom hitting.

Cnc this one pls

Nice, getting better and better. Nice dm's on boom and good flow.

Now you need to practice following the same momentum. Make uke spin the same direction, and make sure you follow that as well.

You could also do with some less flopping, hold some joints and tuck in when you want some spins etc.

tl;dr - Ten times better mate!

Inb4 you're already better than me.

Thanks guys, and swep ill keep that in my mind!