Okay, I'll post what frame you did a general baddie on. Remember that Toribash is a movement simulator with total freedom in movements, and that no move is forbidden to make.
Frame 1350: You ran into your opponets. Collisions are considered bad since it messes up both your and your opponents momentum.
Frame 1200: While getting distance might be a good thing, rocketing too far away leads to less fighting etc. Try to keep a good distance where you both can swing at eachother without interfering with each other too much.
Otherwise there's not much to say. You need a lot of practice so that you can utilize your tori to aim your attacks, blocks and direction better. I also suggest you keep all of your replays in case you want to see your development or look at how one executes a move at certain frames. Just keep at it and you'll succeed at one thing at the time.
Good luck.