Originally Posted by
chab
J2H v2
improved the head and this is my final version of it. hope you guys like it!
the face is a little too long for my liking, her eyes and nostrils/mouth are too far apart but you probably shifted them to better suit the reflection on the helmet. i appreciate the little details you have on the helmet. maybe a cute sticker/vents/dents on the side will help you with asymmetry.
the red and green behind the helmet are off-putting to me, feels like you just put it there cause' "hurdur they remind me of technology". try hints of orange as your secondary colour, it will tie in well with blue as a complementary colour.
you have nice depth for the front part of the helmet, then you got sloppy and lazy for the back which resulted in that awkward shape - it ruined the depth you had and it looks like a sad penguin.
Last edited by iAwesome; Mar 28, 2018 at 12:18 AM.