Overall, I think these are pretty nice. There is improvement between the first and second replays in terms of you staying grounded, and adjusted to the lower gravity. However, I would like to see more progression in these replays. The initial build-up is a strength of yours, and while your movements are eye candy, the creative process seems to just end upon initial contact with uke. In the case of "pinwheel ordeallllll", the replay doesn't just stagnate like "sonora centre", it outright just stops. There was great potential for more to be done in your most recent replay and I will agree with Toad here when he says that there definitely needs to be more dms. I'm anticipating something 'more' in this "big" project of yours.