Jun 23, 2012
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#21
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ub3r
4th Dan Black Belt
Join Date: Aug 2011
Posts: 3,358
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okokok ^
i change the distance and time. is it good?
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Jun 23, 2012
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#22
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Raconteur
2nd Dan Black Belt
Join Date: Dec 2011
Posts: 3,506
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Your movement is sooo...oooo stiff dude...
And the replays need more flow, the movements should be connected to the other move.
Try using more joints and relax more.
Also try to maintain a flow.
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Jun 24, 2012
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#23
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ub3r
4th Dan Black Belt
Join Date: Aug 2011
Posts: 3,358
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ok,how about this?
i make it about 1,5 hours :O
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and cnc this one too
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Last edited by 17april; Jun 24, 2012 at 05:15 PM..
Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
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Jun 25, 2012
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#24
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Senior Member
10th Dan Black Belt
Join Date: Dec 2010
Posts: 889
Server: qa4
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I like them, but for the "Like a boss" you could have got a boom on the last hit.
For the other one, you could have skeeted that head xD but you're doing fine, just try not to make those movements as stiff and you'll be fine.
First replay 8/10
Second 7/10
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Jun 25, 2012
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#25
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ub3r
4th Dan Black Belt
Join Date: Aug 2011
Posts: 3,358
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thx proxxy 
my latest replay.i think this one is better than before.
ja
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Jun 25, 2012
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#26
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Senior Member
10th Dan Black Belt
Join Date: Dec 2010
Posts: 889
Server: qa4
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"What I have done" is alright, I liked the opener I give it 8.5/10.
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Jun 25, 2012
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#27
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Senior Member
3rd Dan Black Belt
Join Date: Feb 2012
Posts: 759
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I liked it too. 9/10 And may I ask, what mod did you use?
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I'm a nobody, and nobody's perfect. I am the definition of perfection.
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Jun 25, 2012
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#28
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ub3r
4th Dan Black Belt
Join Date: Aug 2011
Posts: 3,358
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hi.
i make this replay yesterday.cnc?
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the same replay but i edit it,its moar better.
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Last edited by 17april; Jun 26, 2012 at 04:42 AM..
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Jun 26, 2012
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#29
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Senior Member
5th Dan Black Belt
Join Date: Apr 2012
Posts: 1,290
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^I like the head/arm kick and the split but once u went to the floor for the leg dm's you got kind of unrealistic, plus i didn't like the pose
7.5/10
but i'm not pro nor can i do this so u don't really have to listen to me
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Jul 6, 2012
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#30
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ub3r
4th Dan Black Belt
Join Date: Aug 2011
Posts: 3,358
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my latest replay
sorry for being inactive.
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