Well hey, you're actually pretty good! Your movement is solid, although what i'd like to see is a bit more... Ambition, to your style. It's all over a bit too quickly, when you often could have done some more. However, as Muur mentioned, it's refreshing to see someone who's trying out so many new things, as opposed to sticking with one single setting and trying to repeat what everyone else is doing.
The fact that TWO WEEKS WITHOUT ANY DOWNLOADS OR REPLIES happened is... Absurd, to say the least. You definitely deserve more attention than you're getting! c:
Oh, and i must also apologize for not providing much useful CnC, i am FAR too rusty to give proper critique. :c