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Old Mar 12, 2018   #1
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Dengue Vectors
hi, here I will post some of my personal vector artworks.

Be Thoughtful with your critiques, I want some constructive criticism.
It is nice to know some thoughts.

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This is it.

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Old Mar 12, 2018   #2
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Hands are a bit odd imo, the fingers on left arm aswell.
I dont thing this perspective and position of the arms is helping at all, with breasts over forarms its hard to make it. Breasts are fone imo. Tits. Boobs. Nice
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Old Mar 12, 2018   #3
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I have to redesign the breasts, as suggested on other forums.
they look tasty, but I have to make them real, lol.
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Old Mar 12, 2018   #4
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A think some underboob shadowing would be good, aswell as a thinner shoulder plate. But other than that, looks good man.
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Old Mar 17, 2018   #5
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some updates on the wips.
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Old Mar 19, 2018   #6
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Updated the WIP 2
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Old Mar 19, 2018   #7
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Goodness, you could land a plane on that forehead. Is vector a certain style with how the body is shaped because that doesn't look human with how the stomach arches like a triangle.
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Old Mar 19, 2018   #8
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Not human? Study humans and google vectors term and you may be able to criticise
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Old Mar 19, 2018   #9
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Originally Posted by WeooWeoo View Post
Is vector a certain style with how the body is shaped

trying to offend someone and in the same time making a fool of yourself.
That's catching one and 1/2 bird with a potato.


That's just the style he is going with, I think it's quite cool.
This is like someone criticizing the design of Bart Simpson because people do not have such big round eyes and such yellow skin. Or Peter Griffin for having a ball-sack like shape as chin.

Dengue-buddy, I want to show ya some cool techniques one of this days. For shading and such. Remind me if I don't drop you a message in Discord in the next few days.
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