CnC pls

the opener was ok i guess,but didnt see much flow on transition for the split.
the kick at all was creative,wold be better if had just a bit of more speed,2 dms on the split + decap.

other movements was stiff,just work on the movements.

Ok. What i should do for my movements?

the opener is simple but ok
hits are well
and yea need more work on moves
try to make your tori look less relaxed and faster

Thanks Alpha.

New madman. I made this with 1 frame for frame.

opener was a bit weird
your left leg in the beginning shouldn't of gone up that high
decent dm's, although the first arm dm was a bit weird
cool boom hit on the upper body tho

7/10

Thanks.

I make an edit with a final pose.

bump

bump

hold you neck
you opener was kinda simple,still having problems with movements and stuff,the way you prepared the last kick was very long,but at same time looked much weak.
you keep stiff sometimes,work on more movements and speed.