I feel like all those memories have become widows to death
On the cold nights like this I cannot feel my breath

I’ve watch the best of my thoughts float out the window

Originally Posted by BASHBABOON

okay what are the elements in this poem, i'm like not sure i got insanity and selfless but like what are the others..

I’ve watch the best of my thoughts float out the window
I feel like all those memories have become widows to death
On the cold nights like this I cannot feel my breath
There is a girl that tries to bamboozle my mind
She is way too kind
In a blue skirt she’ll say,
“Good day”

My life is so bastardized
These thoughts are synchronized
I rest on this couch and my mind swims alone
Deep in a willowy whoa
There is no one home
With tyranny and pain
I’ll try to drink them sane

My head presses against this pillow like a rock forced in my spine
The fire elevates my heart
And I’m about to scream; losing my voice I’ll say I’m all right, I’m fine

There are dark clouds engulf my soul
The blackness, like sludge is sucking my mortality
This isn’t who I’d like to be
I don’t feel this fleshy jacket is me