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Old Sep 9, 2015   #1
Skizzify
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Guess Who's Back
Hype it up people. SkizzleDizzleFerShizzle is back in the game baby. Time to abuse uke again. Here are my replays for your viewing pleasure. Currently making replays rn so expect more replays on the same day.
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One more replay in store. It's very basic but I could keep editing this until it turns into a good replay.

If you want to see some of my old works, check my thread from 2013 here: http://forum.toribash.com/showthread.php?t=437272

[I SUGGEST YOU SKIP TO LAST PAGE CAUSE IF YOU DON'T THEN WE GOT A PROBLEM HERE BOY]
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File Type: rpl Bang Bang.rpl (99.2 KB, 19 views)
File Type: rpl Beat then skeet.rpl (127.4 KB, 19 views)
File Type: rpl spinerooni.rpl (52.1 KB, 16 views)
File Type: rpl tricks.rpl (167.3 KB, 12 views)
File Type: rpl Spins.rpl (104.8 KB, 12 views)
File Type: rpl SpaceMan.rpl (111.0 KB, 12 views)
File Type: rpl boomskeet.rpl (88.4 KB, 8 views)

Last edited by Skizzify; Sep 20, 2015 at 08:10 PM.. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
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Old Sep 12, 2015   #2
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bang bang: this one was ok. But usually you don't use grab to carry someone as it will kill all of the momentum you have in order to move uke. Usually people tend to do some kind of manip hit to uke then lift him so he's more lighter to handle.

beat then skeet: I liked the opener to this one, but some of the manip hits were a strange choice. When you try and skeet try and make it one fluid motion. Also keep in mind all the power in a skeet comes from the wrist, the elbow is just an added bonus.

spinerooni: this was fun to watch, nice and simple.

tricks: I don't cnc tricking replays mainly because I can't do them myself and thus I shouldn't be allowed to even give you tips on them.

spins: try and make your hits more noticable by giving yourself a little leeway after hits so they don't look so weak. You get the dms, but the hits don't look pleasant.

spaceman/takes time: cool combo

boomskeet: like I said before, make the skeets look more fluid if you can through relaxing and rotating chest at the right moments. Because your dms are good, but your skeets are really slow and have no oomf to them.


thats quite a lot to go through, but I hope you get the little tips and critique I've given you, just need a little bit more work in there thats all.
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Old Sep 12, 2015   #3
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Many thanks for the CnC, Jingles. I'll make sure to put more time into making replays.
I'll keep posting replays but one at a time since I gave Jingles a headache having to go through all of them at once lmfao. More replays to come!
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Old Sep 15, 2015   #4
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New Replay! What do you guys think of this?
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Old Sep 15, 2015   #5
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Great replay. I like how you took off both hips, did a little kick to stall Uke from touching the ground, then a decap, but there was no pose . I retried it for you and got a shoulder dm with the kick. Then the groin randomly dmd against the ground. It took me 2 weird looking movements to get to a pose. I r8 6/10. Didn't have much action, but the replay was well made. Good job.
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Old Sep 15, 2015   #6
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Thank you, Apathetic. Sorry for the lack of the pose in the replay.
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Old Sep 16, 2015   #7
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So there are some replays that didn't get CnC on my old thread so here's one of them.
Jacking my style.
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File Type: rpl The Destroyer.rpl (126.2 KB, 4 views)

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Old Sep 17, 2015   #8
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Bump.
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Old Sep 18, 2015   #9
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BoomPow: cool hits, work in your style (realism) and the pose. 6/10
destroyer: i dont like the hits... again, work in your style. 5/10
continue... in few weeks you will improve 200%.
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Old Sep 18, 2015   #10
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Originally Posted by Arakata View Post
BoomPow: cool hits, work in your style (realism) and the pose. 6/10
destroyer: i dont like the hits... again, work in your style. 5/10
continue... in few weeks you will improve 200%.

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Thank you for the advice, Arakata. Although, BoomPow wasn't supposed to be realistic. Destroyer is a WIP and I'm currently working on it. Also, thanks for the confidence booster. I appreciate it.
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