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Bump, I need some CnC :c

Sigh, bump again. still waiting for some CnC on the 2 last one.


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nice lines and good base colors set.

You should work on anatomy a bit.
you dont need to start vectoring when the anatomy looks wrong, try drawing more anatomy and study more drawings, you will get it right after you have the base.
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nice lines and good base colors set.

You should work on anatomy a bit.
you dont need to start vectoring when the anatomy looks wrong, try drawing more anatomy and study more drawings, you will get it right after you have the base.

It's okay if I scan some of my Anatomy study drawing so you can judge ?

(Might take a bit of time, i'm kinda busy atm)
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Originally Posted by HawkeyeTFA View Post
It's okay if I scan some of my Anatomy study drawing so you can judge ?

(Might take a bit of time, i'm kinda busy atm)

Dont get me wrong,
I said about hands and forearms and you didnt bother to fix,
you aint seeing the complete and correct anatomy structure yet.
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Dont get me wrong,
I said about hands and forearms and you didnt bother to fix,
you aint seeing the complete and correct anatomy structure yet.

I meant, drawing / showing what i've already worked on for hands, of course
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Your hands and proportions are amazing when it comes to the male body, but
when constructing the male body; Some of your detail lines make the character
look a bit week and super skinny. The rest is golden..
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Your hands and proportions are amazing when it comes to the male body, but
when constructing the male body; Some of your detail lines make the character
look a bit week and super skinny. The rest is golden..

Heeey thanks for the feedback bro, I really appreciate it !

Here's my latest sketches, kinda busy with class at the moment so I have almost no time to draw

Some futuristic soldier attempt



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The first drawing
well the first drawing was amazing
I love the idea. But I have some suggestions and things to help with.
First off at the position and posture the guy is at it looks like the
mask is like plopped on him and looking upwards.
second of all at the lower torso down your positions are all different
directions like at the stance he is in you would think he was about to trip and
fall maybe position one of the legs to be back behind the other one a bit.
Second piece
The second piece the only thing wrong was the positioning and the musclees were
a bit over done too many lines.
Oh and the lips. Try to draw them a bit smaller and not as round.
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Yeah I had lot of trouble with the Soldier pose, this sketch is more a character design than something else tbh


For the 2nd one, i'm working on proportions most of the time when I make proper version on Paint tool SAI
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