Here it is I believe its ok. You Pros can Tell me whats what.

mkey.

the opener was kinda slow and wierd.
and the decap was just a stiff punch not to bad but not good either.
the boom wasnnt to bad but the kick was not that accurat.
a decent replay :3

6/10

^that + dont do grab punches

5.5/10

Cheers for the feedback guys Appriciated.

i didnt like the grab punch.its too sloppy and stiff but good destruction

Alright, here's what I think.
It started with a ugly opener (ugly in my point of view, of movement fluidness etc.)but successful for couple of dismemberment, some might say it's boring BECAUSE, you wait 'till a good time to dismemberment a part of uke's body, but that "waiting" isn't really a good thing to be honest, try using something like Turn frame at 1 so you move faster(Because you move much more times (in frames or turns whatever) and at the end of the replay looks like you are moving fast, plus it works to concentrate more and find more points to dismember a part of uke's body.) The replay was pretty good although, keep up the practice!

8/10

ocrap i forgot to rate 4/10