youre killing the flow in a few places.
still not a fan of the eyes. heres a sketch of what i had in mind, the tribal you used doesnt make for very interesting eyes

first wip in ages!




still i dislike the eyes... =/

I edited it a bit. Made some pretty nice eyes out of what you already had. Also I reduced some of the clutter. You had too many plate things everywhere. Edited a bit of mapping in places.

Just what I would have done.

plates are overrated.

oh... cool wafflez it turned out pretty good! ty

Plates are great if you're eating something messy.

but soup can be eaten from a bowl. and all the messy shit could be eaten from the table also.

anything can be eaten from a bowl and be made less messy by doing so

that depends largely on the utensils being used

have you ever eaten waffles out of a bowl with a fork and knife?

What if the bowl is made out of waffle?