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Old Aug 17, 2018   #1
ETIQUETTE
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poetry
darkness; a haiku

depressing nightmare
a vindictive dark tear drips
betrayed by the past
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Old Aug 17, 2018   #2
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Originally Posted by ETIQUETTE View Post
darkness; a haiku

depressing nightmare
a vindictive dark tear drips
betrayed by the past

heres my haiku if you don't mind.........….

waking up to death

sleeping in the heart of night


only to see light
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Old Aug 17, 2018   #3
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I call this The Tormet That Engulfs My Mind
Skeletons In My closet; Pocket full of Disdain
Bruh I Dropped My
Corter In The Wishing well
I Wish For Xbox Live
The Zbox Lights Up
Nothing; Fucknuggets
Good Samairatan turned Cutthroat
I Go Back To The Wishing well and
To my surprise
My Reflection: Pennywise
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Old Aug 17, 2018   #4
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She did her best to help him.
She always speaks to him in a loud voice.
Wow, does that work?
I checked to make sure that he was still alive.
She folded her handkerchief neatly.
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Old Aug 17, 2018   #5
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Those are quite edgy, let's write something happy,

Hey don't be so sad
Life is good and death is bad
We all gonna die
Be Unique. Be Textured.
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Old Aug 17, 2018   #6
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thats rather depressing,


death my look bad on the surface
but its a permanent solution for all your problems
its dark, at first scary then peaceful and quiet
but untill it get you, you'll keep suffering with your shitty lifes
!دجاج مقلي
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Old Aug 17, 2018   #7
ETIQUETTE
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do u fuckers know what a haiku is
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Old Aug 17, 2018   #8
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i dont
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Old Aug 18, 2018   #9
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Haiku (俳句) is a very short Japanese poem with seventeen syllables and three verses. It is typically characterized by three qualities:

The essence of haiku is "cutting" (kiru). This is often represented by the juxtaposition of two images or ideas and a kireji ("cutting word") between them, a kind of verbal punctuation mark which signals the moment of separation and colours the manner in which the juxtaposed elements are related.

Traditional haiku consist of 17 on (also known as morae though often loosely translated as "syllables"), in three phrases of 5, 7, and 5 on, respectively. (An alternative form of haiku consists of 11 on in three phrases of 3, 5, and 3 on, respectively.) However, some authors are critical with the distribution of syllables, such as Vicente Haya or Jaime Lorente.

A kigo (seasonal reference), usually drawn from a saijiki, an extensive but defined list of such terms.

YO UUNCULTUREE SWÆN
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