i can tell you for certain that the neck isn't disproportionate in any way
source, ex gf of 3 years had the exact same looking neck/build
you seemed to have made some symmetry error, whether it be on purpose or whatever
i drew lines showing you where the crest of what is most likely the top of the breasts and going up, though i could've chose anything else and it be the same
you have something out of line, whether it be the neck, clavicles or collar bones - somethings off
which would make the guy above me a little less wrong and a lot more right
what i can say is that because of the hair it makes this neck seem much thinner than the anatomy suggests
you should've with out a doubt have had the bottom right side of the hair go behind her back rather than lay in front of it
seeing as how you have it darkened to assume depth that would've made it much more convincing and it wouldn't have helped this guy above me come to an odd conclusion
love the palette, dislike the shading but it's not incorrect seeing as those sparkles are multiple light sources, so oh well
Last edited by hobo; Feb 8, 2018 at 07:06 PM.