Toribash
Fixes and changes have been made to the first chapter of The Wanted book. rejoice \o/ will be uploading the second chapter later today :o
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[VIBE] 2015~2016 | Team Pokemon | [Origin] 2014~2015 | Team Aikido | [Obey] ~Because Frost Said So...
two words, fucking. brilliant. this is exactly what Toribash needed. you get introduced to the plot a little to quickly in my opinion. and the first few paragraphs are a little chaotic and I didn't like the long LOOOONg wait for another character to start talking but I think that it was a awesome story. and yes, work on your grammar and sentence structure for the next chapter. cant wait to read more :>
♥Team Aikido♦OoT♣Team Lenshu♠
~Link is my personal Dj
Chapter 2 Has been uploaded. Such Cliff Hang, Much Suspense!

Ill be Working on chapter 3 tomorrow
Last edited by Fates; Apr 25, 2016 at 03:25 AM.
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[VIBE] 2015~2016 | Team Pokemon | [Origin] 2014~2015 | Team Aikido | [Obey] ~Because Frost Said So...
Chapter 3 is up
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[VIBE] 2015~2016 | Team Pokemon | [Origin] 2014~2015 | Team Aikido | [Obey] ~Because Frost Said So...
Chapter 4 of The Wanted Series is up, Its the longest one yet 3k+ words!!! Would have been longer however, It would have been a lot of scrolling on your part so I cut it. With that in mind Expect chapter 5 within next few days. Anyway Read, Review, and ill see you guys next time.
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[VIBE] 2015~2016 | Team Pokemon | [Origin] 2014~2015 | Team Aikido | [Obey] ~Because Frost Said So...
Bump: More updates and stuff
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[VIBE] 2015~2016 | Team Pokemon | [Origin] 2014~2015 | Team Aikido | [Obey] ~Because Frost Said So...
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Update: 5th Chapter of The Wanted Series, is being delayed slightly because of school work
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[VIBE] 2015~2016 | Team Pokemon | [Origin] 2014~2015 | Team Aikido | [Obey] ~Because Frost Said So...
Chapter 5 is here. Read and Review. This one has been one of my favorite to write so far. 4k words plus, Its a long one. We have begun to move out into the world with them, you will see more and more of how much America has changed as the chapters come out. I am currently trying not to jam exposition down everyone's throats keeping it more to a "you see what they see, as they see it."

Anyway I guess ill begin doing Chapter 6 tomorrow. o/
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[VIBE] 2015~2016 | Team Pokemon | [Origin] 2014~2015 | Team Aikido | [Obey] ~Because Frost Said So...