Right, so this is basically my first time in single player O_o

I made a couple of replays, and I know they're not too great, so don't be too harsh please
Ratings, comments and advice would be appreciated, thanks.

ok i'll be nice because you asked.

first things first... your guy was stiff.... use some relax on those arms instead of just holding them up contracted like a fool..... second dont flail ontop of him.... that looks bad.... third use less grab... dont climb all over uke just to get one dm.... maybe if you boomed him that first one woulda been nicer....

keep workin at it mah friend.... keep trying

OK thanks for the advice

You have speed but it isnt fluid and you need to make most contact with uke a dismemberment unless its a manipulation replay.

Practice a bit more and you will get alot better.