that opener started very slow and un-interesting...
but right after,it started looking good
i really dont like the way you hip is extended,i mean it made the kick looks strange in that case...and you also didnt split with the foot,but with the ankle...
the right hand touch was strange
sholder dm was ok,wold be better,but still alright
the other dm of pec+decap was ok
that last dm was good,however i dont like the way you leg was going back before the hit
end pose was alright