Gruszex= nice drawings,i like tribal stuff,but try to make a small end-lines to make them looks more pointed on endcurves.

Alpha= ... WHAT THE F..,dat deformations you have here lmfao,just avoid those deformations and will be fine.

Diuwaybuns= her right(of her view) eye looks just a bit out of normal place...besides that lookomg great so far