I like how you tried to be creative but the execution was trash.
Spinning intro was bade
the transitions seem pretty meh, you could have put more effort into the transitions with masking, to give you a general idea:
your p/c and velo is way too rough.
jump cuts in the end were choppy and the outro was choppy too, if you wanna do slomo like that dont decrease the speed in tb, just twixtor it.
too many shaders.
is the thing at like 9 seconds just lack of effort?
if it was supposed to be like that im sorry but it was bad
red buildup on around 14 seconds was pretty cool but the climax looked like nagato diffusion.
too many movie maker transitions.
the lack of effort in this is so insane, you didn't even bother to freecam 21 seconds.
or the rest of the video for that matter, even if it is just a small clip freecam is always important,