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Old 1 Week Ago   #1
Derpman203
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yay :D
derp getting it dun
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Old 1 Week Ago   #2
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FINALLY. Everyone CNC my friend derp please.

I'll start the CnC off.

Derp and oscar collab 2: there's nothing really wrong with this replay besides the opener, it was overly relaxed and it looks like you got drunk fell and tried to recover by tricking

Derp level up 6: The first backflip is nice but slow, the back handsprings launch was too low and as result, it doesn't look the best, the for a while in the air it looks nice, then while landing the back handspring your abs are very contracted and that makes the landing look weird. during the launch into the flash kick, you're on your toes which just looks bad in my opinion. Then you fully contract your knee that needed to be re-extended later which makes the replay less fluent. The cork swing-through wasn't half bad but the spin is slow and the tuck has bad form, also the landing is scuffed. In total, this is a nice replay though!

Derp and oscar tricking 6: I don't really have much to say about this replay. the most I can give here is just work on your form. If you're confused about what I mean by this look at the top trickers, every single one of them looks good while in the air this is because of the way they tuck, the form doesn't only apply to air movements though, honestly, I'm not sure how to explain it. In-total-this-is-a-good-replay. OH and you should work on not doing those scoot things and not switching the direction of your momentum too often, they make the replay flow weird.

Everything else I've said applied to the rest of the movements, but im gonna add this. When punching relaxing the pec of the swinging arm can sometimes help, and when kicking making sure your arms look/are controlled helps both the replay and the kick.

Like I said at the start. CNC MY MAN DERP
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Old 1 Week Ago   #3
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XD
de derps back at it
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