Mind I am not in practice for making replays really and my replays were never that great so take this lightheartedly.
Originally Posted by
Colors
The 2nd punch looked a bit awkward. but the rest was cool, maby a bit derpy, bu i liek.
Cnc my manip wip pls
I believe it could have been better, though I haven't made a replay for ages and definitely not a good one.... However at the least I can supply you with my shitty version of cnc.
The opener was alright but a bit stiff for my taste, and the kick forcing uke nto the air seemed a bit forced and ugly. I would not personally advise being so stiff and floating to the ground afterwards but maybe that's your thing.. The initial relifting kick was decent but you could have waited a bit longer or done something a bit different so the kick after that didn't seem so useless. From there to about frame 1050 it is decent, but again really stiff and kind of awkward or just weak hits to propel uke. The decap kick was alright but nothing too special, could have been a lot more powerful.
Hope I didnt sound harsh just trying to you know, cnc
Originally Posted by
tylercoon
I am not a fan of the opener but I like the manip and the decap.
Here is another one ;o
Oh god where do I begin.. The first 50 frames were generic but decent, I expected the typical spin into madman. I am honestly not sure why you would extend your abs in the beginning, it makes you look awkward and off balance. At roughly 540 I was again expecting you to launch inwards but you bitchslapped the fuck out of my logic and contracted your knee. From there until about frame 440 was really kinda twitchy and I just disliked it in general, try relaxing and staying more grounded. The kick was meh, should have done more damage than a double arm. The way you... moved back to uke was strange to me but the punt of ukes head made me smile on the inside. Keep working at it, just please take more tome to get rid of the random twitchyness.