any suggestions for where to go with this? I think it looks ok as is but it's short

also thanks for the comments

I'll bump this with a new replay.


lack of booms blah blah

I usually don't mind single dms when they're interesting. Unfortunately, I don't think it's the case.
But good grief that skeet was phenomenal. Anyone who has tried to bounce a hand off the floor knows how hard it is.


Asterisk was really simple, not much to comment on here. I didn't really like the opener, it was a tad slow and the movement was akward.

That skeet was exceptional, being me and sucking ass at skeets I congratulate you on that.