Imortality
The manip-style start was nice, but I noticed you contracted your knees in odd places where relaxed or hold ones would have looked better. The arm Dm could have been substituted for something else more.... attractive( talking about the very first Dm.). I considered the possibility that you could have done a boom instead of a decap, but I figured it looked better with just the decap. To go along with that statement, I wish you would have gotten more Dms to make the replay all that better. The skeet really did well to tie this replay together. Pose was nice also, considering the Match frames you were left with.
Nice Work Omega, I hope to see more in the Future