Opener looked good. A bit slow but it pays back later in speed and uniquenesss.s.z,mzfd.
The boom looks like it could've needed some hardcore editing to get it even but I'm not going to even try to see if that's possible ;P It's just a minor + if it was.
The transfer to the next dm was ok and the throw was really nice.
What nailed it was the whole jump together with the walk. Was really nice as an ending.
The boom looks like it could've needed some hardcore editing to get it even but I'm not going to even try to see if that's possible ;P It's just a minor + if it was.
The transfer to the next dm was ok and the throw was really nice.
What nailed it was the whole jump together with the walk. Was really nice as an ending.
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I absolutely loved the opener, spectacular! I love openers like that.
Boom was stunning, love the way you dm the torso with your knee instead of your leg and then make it look like you dm'ed it with your leg. Though, working a bit more on it to make a bigger boom would be really awesome. I believe you can improve it easily since you use both legs.
Thrust to the lower part was nice, but throwing it and then dm'ing seems a bit impractical, would be better if you dm'ed it on the floor.
Also, you used way too much grab for the replay. I know that grabbing isn't that much frowned upon these days but 3 grabs for 2 hits just seem too much.
Overall, nice man! I think if you edit it a bit more, you can make the replay thousands of times better.
Boom was stunning, love the way you dm the torso with your knee instead of your leg and then make it look like you dm'ed it with your leg. Though, working a bit more on it to make a bigger boom would be really awesome. I believe you can improve it easily since you use both legs.
Thrust to the lower part was nice, but throwing it and then dm'ing seems a bit impractical, would be better if you dm'ed it on the floor.
Also, you used way too much grab for the replay. I know that grabbing isn't that much frowned upon these days but 3 grabs for 2 hits just seem too much.
Overall, nice man! I think if you edit it a bit more, you can make the replay thousands of times better.
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Opener was slow at first, but it picked up the pace.
Grabbing in the beggining was ñnnnha, you could have probably done a prettier hit with that jump.
Good boom, could be bigger if you want.
Transition to the ass kick was flashy, kick itself was a bit disappointing but still overall pretty decent replay.
Opener was slow at first, but it picked up the pace.
Grabbing in the beggining was ñnnnha, you could have probably done a prettier hit with that jump.
Good boom, could be bigger if you want.
Transition to the ass kick was flashy, kick itself was a bit disappointing but still overall pretty decent replay.
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Well the opener was pretty slow in my opinion, but then after frame 620 something you continue it nicely with a better speed movement. The boom was nice, didn't like the grab before it but I know the boom wouldn't happen without it. The way how you throw the lower body then kicking it was great. But the boom byitself was pretty generic though.
Awesome, how you walked at the end looked realistic. Pose was also well done.
Awesome, how you walked at the end looked realistic. Pose was also well done.
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