Toribash
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[REL] Parkour dust (more grassy)
ok this is my first designed parkour mod i have ever done. I hope you guys can give me some tips to make this parkour much better!. Anyway screenshots on my way

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Simple. But i hope someone is gonna make the hole way .
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heres the mod
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Last edited by TorixDemon; Jun 6, 2015 at 09:28 AM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump

Looks good mate.

I would knock 50 or so off the green its a bit bright to be showcasing a light sandstone coloured course.

I would just suggest polishing it. (example. giving it side panels a darker shade from the floor or some kind of detail to break up the eye, this can also be done with scenery in the fore and background.)

Also you could add another section to the top, to make an alternate path to launch up to from the rail, This would also give you an excuse to add in a wall running section to the bottom too if you don't want the top part floating.

Also your target at the end looks a bit awkward, I would take .2 from X value of the sphere and maybe nudge it up slightly. (or you could make the end target your initials or somthing to put your stamp on the map)

Stuff like that? :P

I could talk your ass off about this stuff lol.

Good luck with it man I will keep my eyes out for how it evolves .