start of the replay seems really weird for me. i mean, you could simply get into the pose you want to make the transition.
and most of time you look slightly twitchy.
this is an simple replay imo, it can be good, but all you did here was some opener, moves and do 2 dms.
Dm's are not bad, but you should look a way to make them look better, more powerful, more speed etc, anything that make it looks really good.