im making a replay thread again wooo, it's been a while since i put some effort into these

starting 'er off with the first manip i've made, and my first ukebash in like a year. took an estimated 2 hours or so, with breaks

Sleepy/Shinitai

Just chillin dog.rpl :
Opener :
Generic, and the execution was a little stiff but continued it decently.
I didn't like the way you contracted your glutes while your knees and hips were being hold.
You should have tried to atleast spin by turning your chest to gain momentum and maybe relax your knees because i don't like to see them being that stiff.

Manipulation :
Decent, a pretty well done manip as i can see. The only flaw in your manipulation is how you move and how you control your arms.
When you move your arms up and down, it just not good to look at.
And your movement. Stiff.

Overall was a 'decent' manipulation replay and the decap was good aswell.
7,8/10
You have potential fellow starter pack.

thanks for the cnc m8, i'll def keep the stiffness in mind